Haiku? Don’t Mind if I Do.

I have never written a haiku before so when searching for something interesting to post I decided that I would share my first few attempts with you all. 🙂 Please let me know what you think, I’d be delighted to receive some feedback. You can help me give them titles too! 😀

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Attempt no.1

Autumn morning mist

Passes through ghostly blue lips

Writing on the glass.

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Attempt no.2

Pond lily floating

Beautiful, proud, serene

Blue birds nearby sing.

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